Baywolf

Hello strangeshellie! Neat name! Anyway, down to the review! Impression/Plot: Interesting. I love werewolf/hunter/vampire/creepy mythical stories, so that's good. You don't give us a lot of background

Hey Pers! I swear I'm not stalking you. Just your writing, and only in the past 24 hours. :) Haha, just kidding. I saw your plea for reviews, and I ...

Hey Persephoneia! Perhaps you should take out the "of way" from the fifth line. I think it would sound better without it. I also think that maybe you can delve ...

Hello Maddy! I thought this was cute. At first I wondered how it could be sci-fi, but then I realized it was set in a future of regulation and a ...

Hey! You're right, it is long, but well worth the read I think. I actually starting reading this before I went to class, but realized I wouldn't have enough time ...

Howdy! I like this ending so much better! I can definitely see movement in the plot now, and it makes me happy. :) I noticed that your tenses slipped a ...

Hello Aristotle! (Never thought I'd see or hear myself say that!) Because this is a prologue, and a very short one at that, I don't have too much to say ...

Hello Jenna, Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here better than in high school, cuz there sure seems to be a lot of hatin going on in your ...

Are you sure you aren't me? Because this read a lot like my life so far, at least in some places. I guess that just goes to show that we ...

Hey Bubble! I like it! To me, the parody was obvious because I happen to be well acquainted with each topic you were parodying and I enjoyed reading it. The ...

Hey Bubble! I thought I'd pop on over and give you a review in return for the one you gave me! :) Here we go. Impression: I really liked this. ...

Wow! That was a speedy recovery! Haha! Maybe a little too speedy...how did it happen? One minute she has this awful bruising on her hand and arm and is comparing ...

Hello HolyCheesecake! Welcome to YWS! So here's how this is going to go down. I'm gonna give you my impressions and do a little crititquing, sound alright? Of course it ...

Haha! Your MC Rowe is funny! At first, I was little confused about what genre I was reading, what with all the dark stuff in the beginning about death and ...

Hello! This was very interesting. So far, not much has happened, but I like the concept. In places the flow and grammar was very rough, so you really need to ...