BarcodedKami

Hello there! I suppose I'll be the first to review your rather interesting guide to Zombeism. I'll type my corrections in green so that you can see them! You're basic ...

Your points on bullying are all very good. There is just one thing that slightly irked me whilst reading you wrote: No matter what the appearance of the bully, he ...

This is a very interesting piece. It took me a while to really get hooked into it. I was confused about who was speaking and of what gender the speaker ...

Your story made me smile. It truly did. I loved how you showed the narrator's inner strife in its own comical way. The style is unique in it's own way. ...