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Re: The Murdered and the Murderer (extended)
You enjamb really well, but sometimes you comma splice and use sentence fragments. I totally want to believe your rhyme scheme, but these make it hard.
Oct 5, 2007
You enjamb really well, but sometimes you comma splice and use sentence fragments. I totally want to believe your rhyme scheme, but these make it hard.
Oct 5, 2007
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