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Re: If Beds Could Talk
If beds could talk, what would they say? Tell tales of sleepless teens at play. And elders too, and all between. In honest truth - Them beds would scream. Damn! ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Pig House (1)
Hey, thanks for the review! So I'm a bit irritated at America. There is the whole remainder of the globe out there, and other places have this thing called British ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: Toad Tales
Hiya! Being loquacious only really counts if you can use the words you're using in everyday language. I, for one, couldn't have used the word "loquacious" without you - but ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: Toad Tales
Grammatical and spelling - error alerts always welcome! (;
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: Love
Hi Unique. I'm describing a very fragile kind of love, and for me that goes side by side with sadness. Hence, the amalgamation of love and sadness in the last ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Love
Hi Chips, first off, harsh reviews are fine with me since, so long as you stay focused on the text, I don't see any reason to get my feelings hurt. ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Love
Hiiiii KatyaElefant! I feel like we have a fundamental difference in our understanding of poem structure and how it should be and what's good and what ain't, and you know ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Wages: Chapter Sixteen
Oh that's interesting! Because last night I got out my calculator and decided that if I can get a short story a week done, I should learn a lot (: ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Love
Aw, Kelpies, I know I should be sleeping but I gotta give you a hug. *hugs* don't cry. *gives tissue* actually scratch that last, since you ain't gonna cry I ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Space
BAM, back for the third reply, and I'm sure I'm super chuffed because your reviews are awesome. Does this mean I am awesome too? I will never know. Yes, yesyesyes ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Spring
hehe, two mouthfuls of gelatinous. You don't really like my word choice, do you? XD First "eyeballs", then this :'D It was purposeful, because I usually hatehate hate repetition. I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Spring
Hi again Katya! :D Hm, what was this about. Well, I live in rural Ireland and for some reason I've developed a real fondness for my school bus driver. He ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: persona
Hmm. Hm hm hm. I'm not sure. Okay, so I'm just gonna go all out here and explain why I wrote this poem. I'm in a long distance relationship and ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: persona
Thanks for the Review, KatyaElefant! (btw are you German or something?) So first off, yerr.. titles ain't my strong suit. I don't really give my poems names, other than the ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Love
Go Rugido Sol! Glad I was able to get us some points ^-^ So first off, thanks a bunch for this review. The difference for me between poetry and narrative ...
Jun 29, 2014
