Baboon

Hey Aqua! Babs here for the promised review :D Except there's really not much I can say. This is a fantastic little piece of writing. In terms of your thoughts ...

This isn't a review, this is just a reaction. I liked moments in this. I liked the "have some chances, say you tried for me." I liked the "Have a ...

Ok. Haven't done a review in a while, and never had the patience/skill to do those line-by-line obsessive analyses that everyone loves :P BUT here we go. Good: Flows well. ...

Is this a nightmare or is it a dream? This is all so bittersweet Because you're like the rainbow God lets me see, but not hold Any idea what I'm ...

This is beautifully written. There is one thing I don't like in terms of word use, and that's I hadn’t met any of Loren’s folk and I zealously wanted to ...

I like this piece, and I usually hate anything and everything set in WWII, but I do seriously like this. I'm gonna avoid grammar because that's not my strong point, ...

LOVE THIS LOVE the way the victim's cries are made almost immaterial by not giving them "s. LOVE the suspense and atmosphere. LOVE IT :D Seriously good. Not much else ...

I like it :D ok there's been tons of reviews before me so i'm guessing if there were any grammar errors then they'd have been mentioned, so that's my excuse ...

Hey this is good, i read the prologue as well but didnt feel like reviewing ok :P Soooooo, well firstly even though i don't really like this style/genre of writing ...

Ok this is the first review i've written in a while, but i'll try to make it good :D Hmmm...well I'm no grammar expert and i have neither the attention ...

Hey again pretty crazy, thanks for the review of my latest thing :) Kk so I see basically everything about this has been reviewed, so ill just say that i ...

This is very cool and well written, I'd love to see where this goes. I personally would inject a little more description and setting, but that's probably just me :P ...

Woah this is excellent! Pace and flow work brilliantly, characters are believable and interesting and the story is captivating. I wanna read more!!! Seriously, really really good. But PLEASE kill ...

This is gooooooooood. I like how you start with action to make us want to read more, then explain to us the background and build tension, and then build up ...

Hey pretty crazy urm im new as well haha but ill give reviewing your story a shot. Ok so firstly your pace is great! Normally i prefer the slower, more ...