Babanuuk

Hello! Your song is nice, but the message is unclear. It seemed a little too tentative and vague. I would suggest spicing it up with some detailed imagery and creative ...

Hey there. When I read this I couldn't help but think of the Police. Maybe that's just because the title sounds so much like "Message in a Bottle." :) I'm ...

What's up. I really dig the introduction; you took something that's been done a lot in metal music and gave it your own spin. I felt it again I only ...

Hey there! I am going to comment as I go... The silent engine increasing dramatically in speed as the rider clamped her hand tightly on the acceleration of the motorcycle. ...

When I read it aloud and with a strong rhythm, it's really cool. Very lively. Not a vague grasp at a myriad of emotion like a lot of poetry, but ...

Wonderful poetry. Your writing has personality . :D It is very abrupt and temporary, which is a good thing, but you might consider tempering it with something concrete, something the ...

First, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It was emotionally involving from the start, a very satisfying read. I would say that the first stanza seems to awake a certain emotion ...