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it's ok any way old made ropes are are very thik and strong but look like they have been worn down to fool the eye and in royal deth setenceing ...

cool man that was really good don't make any changes casue i found no flaws this should have like a nother chapter or somthign i liked it. KEEP GOING

the was wickedly deep man ROCK ON it was so cool i love how u decribed ur hart jumping into him and the other grl thing so kool

hey cool idk wat for u to fix u use suck rich text and good flewence ur so better than me

lol LOVS IT :)

I will say this one more time. It is supposed to be small because it’s a sample. I need to know what sounds good. I will make it longer when ...

Thats awsome Swearing and excessive smileys and caps lock are big no-no's. Love, Poetry Crew.

well i'll let a pro do this one of my friends who is a wiz at this with out changing any of the main writing. god u guys are so ...

it's supose to be like that so ppl know how it was edited that y there are () in them thanks for the advice but it is staying the wa ...

i find no flaws

i love it