Azzman88

Hi June, Thanks for the review, always nice to hear another writer's opinion! Reading back over now I realise that the poem is a little all over the place and ...

Hi Kat, Thank you for your review! It really helps to see what other writers think of my work and where to improve. I will take on your suggestion to ...

Hi Marde, thanks for the review, i really appreciate the feedback! I just want to Clarify a few things for you. I named it "our best on offer" because it's ...

Hey thanks everyone, It is all great feedback. Its funny to realise how much shit can go into a poem without even noticing. HAHA i have a tendency to just ...