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Or you can do them as attachments from your computer. That's how I did mine.

True, I merely assumed that the Fourth Dimension was time, simply because I have heard it said so often (most often in time-travel references in fiction). I have heard about ...

Hullo, Pinky! I have returned. ^_^ I know you don't think you've changed much, but I really like this version a lot better than the previous one. I love the ...

Hi! I'm back! Sorry it took so long for me to get this to you... but better late than never, aye? The underlined bits are parts that are awkward/incorrect, the ...

Hullo again! I'm not going to do the line-by line stuff right now because 1) Wolf and Tiger have covered most of them. 2) you're not really done messing with ...

Alright. To continue this rambly tradition... I just felt sortof inspired after taling to you last night, and... voila! Yay! I'm proud to have inspired you, Monkeybug. ^.^ Yes. I'm ...

Hi! I'm back for the second part. ^.^ I'm not going to do the line-by-line nitpicky stuff today -- partially because I don't have the time and partially because I ...

Okay. I'm back. ^.^ The end is so much better! I loved that paragraph where he is humbled by how ridiculous he once was. Really, it was perfect. I still ...

Hi! I'm back for more, as promised. :) Apex Again, it has the feeling that it should be some folk tale or something -- which I love! At each hierarchical ...

Sorry for posting yet AGAIN in the thread, but I was reading this again and I just had to point out the fact that I love the irony of this ...

Thank you guys so much! Canislupis>> Thanks! Your review helped so much. I have fixed most of the little things you pointed out and will work more on the more ...

Thank you two so much! I guess I need to clarify Kenny's species... but I didn't really want to to be obvious. I'll have to think about it. Sam: by ...

About the 'I don't remembers' in the first part, I did consider doing some of that, but I wanted to seem like it was actually happening as I was writing ...

Thank you all so much for reviewing this! I'm actually feeling a bit depressed about this piece, but I'm going to try to edit it before posting any more. Right ...

Thank you so, so much, Suzanne! That critique really helped a lot... not only with helping me realize what I need to work on, but also with boosting my morale. ...