Azila

Hi. Well, this isn't really my type of reading... I enjoy Hitchcock films ( Vertigo , in particular -- have you seen it?), but for some reason reading a story ...

That's so sweet. This isn't the last part, is it? *braces herself for the answer that she dreads but thinks is true* She dropped all her books on the couch, ...

Hi Suzanne! I'm back for more of your addictive writing! :D Elijah, the mourning of nothing, sat across from us, and Trisha, the loner with friends, sat next to him. ...

Hi Suzanne! I have returned for second helpings. :D The burnt red paint on the door was pealing like a flakey scab. I have to agree with Andy -- this ...

Hey, Suz! So many other people have already reviewed this, that I'm not so sure how helpful my review will be. I'll try, though, because I don't want to just ...

*gasp* You never got your complimentary critique for participating in the Instructor contest! :shock: Why didn't you PM someone? If we had known that whoever was assigned to your piece ...

Hi! I'm not that good with poetry, but I'll do my best to give a helpful review anyway. :P I agree with... *goes off to check who said it* ...Leja ...

Hello, and welcome to the YWS! Please excuse me if my review is harsh--sometimes it just comes out, lol. Anyway, nitpicks first: The darkness that consumed me whole scared me ...

Alright, Nitpicks first. First in the county spelling bee, first in districts, and now this. --Shouldn't this be "First in the county spelling bee, THEN in districts, and now this?" ...

Hi, Canis! Far off down the road, I can see the village, lights glowing faintly inside. --Inside what? Maybe I'm just being dull, but I think you should specify. I ...

Hey there! I want to make it clear before I start that I am by NO MEANS an expert when it comes to poetry. In fact, I'm pretty unknowledgeable. But ...

Hello! Lovely imagery you've got here. But I'll go into that more later -- nitpicks first. She trusted her fingers to their task – to perfect the shaded colors of ...

Hello! Overall, I have to say, I really liked this. But more of that later -- nitpicks first. :D That caused Arabella to smile, but we all consulted Lori who ...

Hello! I haven't read 'Cabbage,' but I hope that doesn't matter. :D The hum of the air conditioner accompanied the sound of his mother’s shifting around nervously. I think that ...

Ooh! I was randomly shuffling through your portfolio and saw this -- and decided to revisit it. :D Random note: I just remembered why the name Isaria sounded so familiar ...