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Re: Just The Life Of A Writer
Heythere! Thanks for the request. I feel like I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a while... Anyhow, nitpicks first. My perfect drink has all the mixings of life. It ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Like Sisters
Hiya, Elinor! Sorry I'm kind of late. Okay, I'm not going to do a full nit-pick session, but there are a few awkwardnesses that I think you should probably look ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Where I can be me.
...And so, I finally have arrived. Apologies for the delay! I'm not going to do any nit-picks (because other people seem to have picked at it pretty well) but I ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: The Grey Place
Ahoy. I don't do much poetry reviewing, generally, so pardon me if I'm a bit unpracticed. The world doesn't just fade out, it just switches into the black, until the ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Techno Fan (First edit)
Howdy thar, my mint BriStish friend. I was going to read this piece while listening to the song, but there's the most enormous thunder-and-lightening storm going on right now (well, ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: It was over quickly
Hey there, Flyer! Congratulations, this is my 700th review. ^^ Dudette's already don a bunch of nit-pick-ish stuff, so I'm not going to do anything like that--but I do have ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Myriad maze
Hi there, freebie! I'm really not a poet, and I don't do much poetry reviewage, generally, but since you asked so nicely, here I am. First off, let me point ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Letters *Edited*
Hi. First off, I'd like to point out a few little technical things. I'm not going to do a full nit-pick session, but there are a few things that stuck ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Vulture & Swan
First off, let me just say that I have a pretty big soft spot for this type of genre. You're drawing from the vocabulary of those old British ballads, like ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: grief
My poetic expertise is only about up to my ankles, so I probably shouldn't be pretending to help you with this, but I thought I might as well give it ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Departing
Hi there. I saw you'd posted something and thought to myself "self, I think you should review this" so here I am. I haven't tasted water as clean as this, ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 10
I'm not sure which is more amusing to read: the novel chapter or the family discussion happening below. ^^ So. Another great chapter. I know you took a while between ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 9
I was starting to wonder where in Arty's name they'd get those horses. If this is who I think it is... then... oh goodness, what have I done?! D: Anyhow, ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: I Think I'm In Love
Princess, my dear, this is beautiful! First off, I'm just going to nab a few little nit-picks. All around us our classmates are sprawled out in various positions, some watching ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 8
And so it came to pass, on the twentieth day of May in the year of our Lord two thousand and eleven, that the Gila Munster returned to her couch ...
May 21, 2011
