AyumiGosu17

Thank you so much!

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Thank you!

Aw, thank you! I was a little worried about how this story would be received. Thank you for your support!

Thank you, Hamei.

Thanks for the reviews! It actually was a report for school last semester; it came out at fourteen pages on a word document... ugh. But I decided to go ahead ...

Thank you, Questio! I'm trying to update my portfolio a little bit, so hopefully I can get some more online soon.

Thanks, Snoink. Yeah, we've since discovered that she's very affectionate and tender. I'll show more into it as I continue writing. It's been almost a week, so I've had a ...

Lol, yeah... I am, habitually, a little verbose at times. Thank you for the tips. I'm working on a full edit right now; I'll update it here shortly.

Lol, yeah, you're right about the dinosaur part. But that's the fun in it! :p I do see your point, so I'll see what I can do. I'll probably end ...

Hmm. More interesting, definitely. I didn't see that many errors this time, so you're getting better with proofing it before you post. Good job!

Go back to the previous page, where all the links to different works are. There's a little link box that says "New Topic" above the list of works. Click on ...

*Tip: When you post a new chapter, put it in a new discussion so people will actually see it.

Thanks for the replies! Luci, thanks. I am probably as protagonist as some people come in my parts; I was actually hoping to turn this into a genuine Children's Book, ...

No problem! And I do think it's much better now! I got more out of it reading it this time, making it that much more enjoyable. :wink: Keep writing! Let ...