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Re: Just Love
It is nice, keep up the good work! But you might want to review the repetition:either make it more common and become a literary device, or find better rhymes.Good luck!
Aug 13, 2015
It is nice, keep up the good work! But you might want to review the repetition:either make it more common and become a literary device, or find better rhymes.Good luck!
Aug 13, 2015
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