Awakening

I did enhoy this poem quite a bit. I appreciated that the abba ryhme pattern was at least a little more creative than the aabb or abab pattern that finds ...

I liked it, it was am extremely good example of narrative poetry. Narrative poetry is, at its best, an emotionally enveloping and ironic. Both of which you executed very well. ...

I pretty much agree with above commentor, in the end, people will not enjoy reading a poem that sounds like an acuustaion or attempted indoctrination by a radical. I think ...

I liked it, and I think if you divided it up correctly, it could be an excelleny lyric POEM. But i always see a song or song lyrics as having ...

I enjoyed it overall. I was wondering, just by the title, if it would be the rantings of one radical group or another, but I was happy to find that ...

I thought the premise was very good, and even in the rough stages, this poem had excellent imagery. I don't like long drawn out reviews when other people give them ...