Awake

Hi, I'm A newbie to this site.... and I'm a bit apprehensive about posting my "ideas" as I call them. I will greatly appreciate every critique. I have a few ...

Heres it is... sorry about length Chapter 2 Honey, amber eyes but they quickly began to darken and harden into black granite. As the rocks glinted, my whole body lifted ...

Clouded Gem The embers of my hope cease to glow Radiant colours. Ebony ash asphyxiates any chance of Redemption. Emptiness pulses through numb and lifeless Veins that cringe through out ...

Dreamful Reality Devoured by darkness My heart races and pounds in my ears I reel my heavy breath in my raw throat. Drenched and numb Screams and screeches all around ...