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Re: Forked
This was good! This guy seems like an interesting character. I'm intrigued about this person, I really am. Your first paragraph got me curious, which is good. It definitely succeeded ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: A Voice of Nothing: part two of Vox Nihili
This is a really interesting story. I like the voice of your character - it really shows. There was one thing that was kind of confusing for me...when you transitioned ...
Nov 25, 2008