Auxiira

This is a very storybook, but I don't see what it's doing here...

Duuu itaaaaa

ooh so capitals, missed words and fullstoppies! Okay! Thanks WTWG!

Umm, it's not formatting. I had paragraphs in there

I'll review this when I'm not at school, but isn't this chapter 2?

you're welcome!

^^ you're welcome!

It's not that. It's that if you don't format it properly, then people won't want to read it as much as if it's formatted properly. I can see that you've ...

Ohh you didn't have to be so harsh Ita. Also if you have the time to review this then you have the time to review my short story Auxii

Um it's about a man who discovers imagination...sort of. It really didn't make much sense in my dream and apparently it doesn't make much more sense here...

It's more a man who never had a childhood who discovers imagination and becomes a child again... but yeah!

Really I love you guys, really really.

... I did put that this was a dream and really shouldn't make sense in the description part... didn't I?

Thanks for the pointers Wherethewindgoes! I've changed some of the stuff, the other bits didn't really fit in with how I write...^^ Thanks again Auxiira

but zach doesn't die. It's the word that shuts her down. (just to say...)