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Re: The Dark Goddess [3]
Yay!!! You already got the third one out! It was hot and humid and many of the sailors were bare-chested as they went about their duties. The sentence structure is ...
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Re: The Dark Goddess [2]
Eeeeeep!!! I'm sooooo sorry it took so long to read this. Okay, here I go! At dusk his stiff body was ceremoniously laid into a plundered rowboat and lowered into ...
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: The Dark Goddess [1]
Peering out the portholes Josette couldn’t see much but the hull of the other boat. Peering out the portholes , Josette couldn’t see much but the hull of the other ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Far From Here Part 1
Once Lemon asked her mother what she used the can for and she said: It's so that I can go to my happy place. The way you brought this into ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: How I Saved James
I just have to say, your analogies are amazing and got some laughs from me. Today might have been beautiful, what with the sprays of cherry blossoms and the pearly ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Faerie Wings- Tam: Aged Eight
In any case, she’s close by, and if Mam’s voice rings out she can duck around the corner and be there in half a second. Get ride of In any ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: ...
Wow, this story was really weird. This is definitely the first of it's kind. My favorites would have to be the Puppet one and the Superman one. The puppet one ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: The Statement
Since no one posted here yet, I decided to check it out. That couldn’t do it or anything else any good, but it felt good to him. I love where ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: The Dark Goddess (title pending)
Satisfied she spun on her heel and walked right into her Father’s chambers. Satisfied , she spun.... As soon as the door clicked shut on the Captain’s quarters Jo let ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Runner
I absolutely LOVE how you approached this story. The way you wrote it really described you character and made her feel real. Like every word spoken is as if your ...
Jul 27, 2008
