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Thanks for your review, I know it's a bit dramatic, I just didn't want to change it much (I wrote it a while ago.) And I suppose your right. I ...

Hey Fortis Nice poem, it flows well, and has a nice story with it. You did very nice.

Thanks you for the grammatical help, and for your support! I will fix the errors and might redo the story in the future. Extending it or starting from scratch. Thanks ...

Great first chapter! It drags the reader in quickly and doesn't let them go. The atmosphere is perfect and the looming sense of danger, confusion, and mystery are presented wonderfully ...

Thanks for the review! I'll work on creating better sentences and might redo this story as a novella or novel in the future.

Thanks

I'm not a pro I'm a bad writer I'm gonna drown in compliments help. uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh (seriously though, thanks. I'll keep writing till the day I die. Then I'll probably write ...

Thank you SO SO much!! You really did inspire me to keep writing. Thanks so much for your review!! I might make it longer. But I currently have a lot ...