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Re: compare
I was really, really confused by "eins" at the beginning. I stared at it for a few minutes, unsure what to do with that little word, until I stuck it ...
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: either way
Hi! Welcome to the Wonderful World of YWS! I love the imagery here. It makes me think of girls dancing in the air in shimmery skirts. Very nice. A few ...
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: Open Your Eyes
Whoa. Very different then I thought it would be, and very cool :) It's got a really great concept. A few things: *"My bathroom is small, and you can see ...
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: Deleted 29
Wonderful, wonderful language. I want to hug every one of your metaphors. I like the lyric quality. Some things sound a little awkward: *"he’s a physical element, black and sticky ...
Aug 15, 2012
