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Aurrora

  • Poetry » General, General Re: compare

    I was really, really confused by "eins" at the beginning. I stared at it for a few minutes, unsure what to do with that little word, until I stuck it ...

    Aug 19, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: either way

    Hi! Welcome to the Wonderful World of YWS! I love the imagery here. It makes me think of girls dancing in the air in shimmery skirts. Very nice. A few ...

    Aug 19, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Open Your Eyes

    Whoa. Very different then I thought it would be, and very cool :) It's got a really great concept. A few things: *"My bathroom is small, and you can see ...

    Aug 19, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Deleted 29

    Wonderful, wonderful language. I want to hug every one of your metaphors. I like the lyric quality. Some things sound a little awkward: *"he’s a physical element, black and sticky ...

    Aug 15, 2012


I’d heard he had started a fistfight in one of the seedier local taverns because someone had insisted on saying the word “utilize” instead of “use".
— Patrick Rothfuss, A Wise Man's Fear