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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Chapter one)

    Haha, he will escape eventually. He also will get a name in like, the next chapter. I can%u2019t just call him %u201Cthe wolf%u201D forever.

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Prologue)

    Thank you for the review. And yes, I did mean to make that part horrifying. I absolutely hate animal abuse, and wolves are one of my favorite animals. It killed ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Shadow's Rising Chapter 1

    I mean, yeah! Again, I really like this and will definitely read more tomorrow when I get a chance. Unrelated statement, but Moonwatcher is one of my favorite characters in ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Prologue)

    Thanks, I appreciate the review. And yes, I did mean to make that part horrifying. I hope you%u2019ll like the up coming chapters!

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Prologue)

    I%u2019m glad you like it! 21%u2019s sister will join the story in later chapters. I hope you%u2019ll like chapter two when I%u2019m done with it :)

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Shadow of the Orange Tree

    OKAY *slams down hand on table* WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE ME CRY? So I was reading this with my good ol’ pup beside me. He doesn’t know what ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Dark Side of the coffee machine 2- rich girl

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    Ok, someone call the cops before I lose my sh- Honestly, made me really mad, poor dogs. I’m a dog person (and owner) so it always makes me feel angry ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Literature, Lyrical Re: The Tallest Tree

    Wow. I have no words. Oh wait, yes I do. This is one of the best short stories I have ever read! It’s basically a never ending cycle, and I ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Find An Anchor

    Just. Quick little theory on what I think that could be. My first reaction to reading this was %u201CIs it a metaphor? Or not?%u201D I%u2019m honestly not sure, but here%u2019s ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Prologue)

    Just finished editing! Not much needed to be though... Luckily.

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Prologue)

    Thanks for the review. I copy pasted this from a Google doc and forgot to put certain parts into italics, such was the scientist%u2019s lines, he%u2019s thinking everything, not saying ...

    Jun 8, 2023


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