Audy

MMM, Dibs on this! I shall come back to review this proper! But for now, try using this color instead of white: D4D4D4

Thanks for the reviews, everyone! :) I also appreciate all the corrections. Duely noted and fixed now. I am planning to continue this, but I have to keep myself a ...

Thank you for your kind reviews :) And you both are right. By top to bottom, I actually meant column by column :X my bad! But thanks for correcting me. ...

The "portrait" house was more a figment of her imagination as none of those portraits described were real. Miranda is insane--she thinks everybody is going to leave her or else ...

Greenriver- Likewise :) Thank you, and you're right now that I look back to it, it does seem like the wrong narrative to take, I'll look over this sometime and ...

Plus, I loved reciting this to a little jingle XD lol! :lol: The 'I don't know about you all' sounds a bit Christmasy doesn't it? Wasn't done intentionally. I couldn't ...

Thanks so much everyone! I've fixed the commas and a few minor things and I appreciate everyone's critiques and feedback. I'm glad I could write a poem we all relate ...

I really love this! :D I think you did an excellent job, your word choice was great and it flowed very well! ^_^

i really enjoyed your poem. the pattern of each stanza was really quite fascinating and it was very deep. i didn't like the end though. first off, i wouldn't start ...