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Hey AriannaK, I realize you're pretty new to YWS so I first would like to welcome you! :D I think for an early piece of yours, this is actually pretty ...

Lilchoma, Now this indeed is a lyrical piece! Well-done :D This reads and flows so well, it made me want to read it a few times. The rhyming is subtle ...

Noelle, Overall, a great piece that commemorates the event. It certainly takes one back to memory lane - but if I may, the attacks happened September 11, 2001 - that ...

Dragonrider, OI! What are you doing? Rip those abstract words out of your poem altogether! What a weak start compared to the rest of your poem! Innocence, Forgiveness, gaiety, Pure, ...

Maddy, Overall the poem delivers a powerful message - but note that everything is explicitly said and told and you don't allow for any real experience to be had. What ...

Inkwell, I've come to try my best at deciphering this! Actually, reading through this...nothing really confusing at all xD Jasmine perfumes the woolly foreboding which waxes o'er the balcony, rails, ...

Saccharine, I thought this was really good for a first poem! :) Let's look at it closely... Because I know i'll be happy on whatever I do Remember to capitalize ...

Hey CrazyMuffinAssassin, I'm really excited to be reviewing this, it actually held my attention all the way through, so I enjoyed it. Now, feel free to hate me for not ...

Hey Cspr, Will you excuse me for reviewing this without taking a look at the previous chapters? Though this chapter alone - I am impressed. It actually made me want ...

Nioxre, hold him down as long as she could, “ O o r I’ll kill you!” Lowercase the 'o' here since it's part of the same sentence. So far I ...

Jas, I actually want to go back and read the previous chapters. I found that all the characters were hard to keep up with, but that's my fault for reviewing ...

Planve, Devils are normally placed beside bad, but no one wonders how they are made. When they are made there is no way they can be changed back to their ...

Hello anna, I agree with your reviewer above who gave quite a comprehensive review. Too add to it and to comment more on the content: It's not a bad start. ...

Sachiko! I must say I really enjoyed this short :) I love your handle on the characters. I kinda got the one or two hints of Scifi xD It just ...

Alex, I have to say muuch better in this chapter. I also did a quick reading on the second chapter - Lil seems interesting as well. Since I'm reviewing this ...