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Re: Papillon
Hey! So I am Audrey, and seeing as you have no reviews, I thought I might give you my input. So lets get to it. The Good I think you ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: The Wall
First, I would like to thank-you for the review you gave my piece, so I thought I might return the favor. :D So without further ado... The Good, The Great, ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Suddenly...
I know the feeling, I have lost quite a few good peices that way. It really really stinks! My suggestion is to always work in Word. Normally, they have built ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: It's a spoon's life, really.
Okay, so I wrote a really careful review for this piece, but it was accidently deleted, it took me like an hour. :? I will try and type it up ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: Short Story
Hey! :D I am Audrey, and I thought I might review your piece. I'll just highlight some of the big things I noticed. Grammar While there was a few other ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: A mischievious man on the Moon has some fun!
I really liked the poem is was really whimsical, and made me smile, which is always good. :D I especially enjoyed these lines because I could immediately picture it in ...
Oct 21, 2009 -
Re: Tristan and Anna-Chapter One
I think this is a great beginning to a story. I have a few comments. First, I found the prologue to be a bit jolting, and slightly cliche. Like was ...
Oct 21, 2009
