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Re: Deleted
This is awesome!!!! I LOVE it. It has a bit to much romance for me right now, so it would be nice if you toned it down a bit, but ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Supreme Team: Chapter 2 Fire Burning
Ok. I saw that a lot of people edited your story a bit. Sadly, I caught a lot more grammar errors. So here we go: "Dam" is technically spelled "Damn" ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: I need help with this one.
I'm not poet, so i cannot really help you, but I love the theme in it. It really flows well and the ryhme scheme gives a very nice rythem. Great ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Appetizers
I love theses 'appetizers!' They are just great--giving you just a bite of a story. Leaving you there hoping for more. Are you doing any more? This is just so ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Supreme Team: Rise of Pyro Flame Chapter 1
Hello! This is a WONDEFUL start. I love the way you just pulled me right into the story. Umm, you could maybe separate the paragraphs a little bit more instead ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Heroes and Demons (Chapter 1)
Hooked. As simple as that one word: hooked. This is a wonderful start. There weren't any really noticable grammarical errors, and it was so interesting and wonderful to read! I ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Butterfly on the Floor (Prologue)
Wow. Beautiful. I love the sadness in the story and small glimpse of hope. I will be reading Chapter 1 when it comes out! Great description. Only, I would like ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Cuts.
Ok, I'm no romance story expert, but I like it. It was well thought up and beautifully written. It makes you think really deeply about love. What is true love? ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Bloody Angel: Prologue
Well. It's okay. It doesn't have enough description for my taste. It only tells you whats happening. I can't imagine what's happening. I'm not in your character's shoes. And talking ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Demon- Prologue
I love it. It is really good. I love that this is just all on how Carter thinks. I read the spoiler after i read the story. I'm guessing that ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Copy Copy
This is a great story Jazz! Is there more to it? It seems that you really left the reader hanging there, with your ending. Anyway, I love the large amount ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Untitled story chapter 1
Sorry, but I couldn't go through the whole story in one review. I filled up a notepaper of editing points though. So first things first: Grammar. You probably didn't read ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1
Well the other reviewer took my editing job. :P Laugh Out Loud. So that leaves me to do the complementing! It was a great story. So detailed! At first, I ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: A Hopeless Romantic and Hating It: Chapter 1
Ok. I'm going to give you honest feedback, and I hope it isn't to harsh to you. First, it's a really good start for you romance novel. Ok, now for ...
Nov 4, 2011