Audrey

Hey Alexwriter! Interesting idea you have here! I definitely liked the way you characterized the foster parents, you get a good sense of who they are, just from those few ...

Hey Cspr! So I liked the setting of this story, this dark, urban, gritty feel really appeals to me. I really got a sense of the atmosphere and mood, I ...

Hello Searria! So obviously, you have the start of a very powerful emotional story here. From what I can tell, you have a good concept. This story, with a little ...

Hiya Randomer! So, first let me say, I really enjoyed this piece. Some of your imagery was beautiful, particularly in the beginning of the piece. It was a great way ...

Hello! It's me again. Hope you don't mind a second review. ^^ Basically, nearly everything said in the first review pertains to this part as well. I still think you ...

Hello Dreamwalker! So I really liked parts of this piece. Particularly, Janie's reaction to the news of her mother's death. Very believable, very human. Denial is the first stage of ...

Hello! So, I just have to say I really really enjoyed this, like really. Your MC had a very distinct voice, and it made this piece very colourful. The way ...

Hey! I would like to preface this review with the fact that I don't normally read or review science-fiction, so you might want to take my suggestions with a grain ...

Hello! So I liked this piece. You have a really interesting back story here. The idea that your MC has special abilities, while certainly not new, is something that you ...

Hiya! Okay, so I think this piece has potential, I definitely would be interested in reading a second chapter, so that's a good sign. I really liked your dialogue. It ...

Hello! Thank-you for the request. Sorry it took so long, I have been really busy with school and such things. As I have said in my first review, I really ...

Hello! First, let me say that I really liked this piece. There is something refreshing about it. The world you are building here seems an interesting one, and I would ...

Hello. As a person who appreciates writing with a dark edge, (one of my favorite books is the Bell Jar, afterall) I quite enjoyed this. I felt the contempt your ...

Hello! So, this is a really decent piece I think. You showed us a scene with a fair amount of detail, and you dispersed information throughout your piece, without getting ...

Hello! This is an interesting concept, writing from the point of view of a fast food worker. I think it's something that everyone can relate to. I mean who hasn't ...