Attolia

Thanks so much niteowl! I'm so dyslexic with some of those mistakes at the end. And will definitely work on the things you noticed in the beginning... thank you again! ...

For sure, yeah YWS seems pretty amazing in that regard, and it's cool to watch it evolve over the years. And it's interesting to see people age with it, which ...

Hey hey, Thank you!! When I first read your review while half-asleep this morning, my first thought was something to the effect of how incredible it is that such a ...

Hey hey. Thanks for the encouragement! I'll try to keep writing. I'm doing the PROLOGUE thing, I think (*gasp*), so I may post that, and if so I'll let you ...

Thank you again! I wrote Chapter Two before I had your and Skins's advice, so you might run into some of the same problems there (which you won't if I ...

Ey ey ey, You're the best, still. Seriously, I have a friend crush on you. I meant to tell you and Heather that I posted this/ I was going to ...

Skins, I came here with the intention of reviewing but honestly I can't think of anything; this is too good. So this will just be a comment. I completely didn't ...

Skins you're the best! Sorry for my late-ish reply; I was out of town all weekend. I definitely agree about making the scene where she drugs him more tense and ...

Hey Jyva! Thank you so much for this very thorough review! I don't think we're quite on the same page with everything (i.e. I do know what "condescended" means, but ...

Thank you so much Heather!! This was very, very helpful. I used to be notorious at misusing words -- it's good to see that hasn't changed, lol. Some of those ...

Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to look this over. The setting for this chapter was upper-class France, right before the First World War.

Haha I met so many people in London who said the same thing about never having been to Scotland. (There's no excuse, it's a train away and so incredible!!) For ...

Cool, okay. Yeah I was wondering if it was meant to be an ambiguous setting in the UK. (I lived in England and Scotland for two years -- one year ...

That's so funny that you replied just now, because I literally just edited my review... I think I was too extreme at first. (His voice isn't "in-your-face;" I took that ...

Haha yes I did mean violet -- the horrible bit too is that I did edit and read over my review before submitting! And thank you for the help with ...