AtomicSpaceKid

I feel the subtle anger behind almost each line of this poem. It has good length and storytelling. I like the way you ended it with a question, leaving the ...

God I can feel the burning anger through every line. It has so much raw emotion and heavy intent I’m just absolutely drowning in it. It feels more like an ...

I feel the sluggish pull out of writers block with this one. It feels that you are trying to convey a type of emptiness and feeling of being lost in ...