Asteria

Thank you for the review. I'd thought about putting more description in about the vampire that bit her and turned her, but I liked the vague aspect of it. A ...

Thank you for the review. I appreciate your thoughts and will take them into account, but will be keeping the story as one solid piece. I'll keep what you said ...

Thank you for the review, Eferhilda. Sorry there isn't more to read, but it'd come to a natural end. Perhaps if I do an addition to it, I'll let you ...

Thank you for the review. The sentence structure that I use is a stylistic choice. If I were to break up some of the sentences as you suggested, it'd lose ...

Absolutely! I'd love to see when you've added more so that I can read as it progresses.

Not a problem in the slightest :)

Dragon, Thank you so much for the review! I know that my style isn't for everyone so I'm happy that you managed to make it through to the end despite ...

JC, Thank you so much for the review! You're definitely right in that I can get very wordy...I've noticed this over the years, and have yet to alter my style ...

Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm glad that you liked it and hope to live up to your expectations with the next installments.