Asteral

Hi, your dialogues were awesome but perhaps you should try to cut it down. Try to put in more description. Oh ya there was a spelling mistake! "Y life is ...

Hi! I find your story very interesting. It had emotions and description, but I feel like theres no plot. No hard feelings. Does the character tries to survive throughout the ...

Hey! I've read your story and I could say it was awesome!. You had good description,dialogues and suspense. You even had a good background of your character! The only problem ...