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*Wow Ben, that is a big rating. Well, I'm about to write my very first story that would deserve that same rating :P *

Every day of mine is similar to the one in this autobiographical like piece. So, sure I'll look into doing another. :wink:

“I’m up Mom, I’m up , ” I say dryly to her. Don't forget those commas. :wink: Tentatively, I open my eyes and roll over to see what time it ...

Remember the rule of keeping the actions and speaking parts of different characters on separate lines. :P - :smt059

Conclusive proof that the pen is mightier than the sword In this case it would be keyboard. :wink: And as for the brave man in the story, peaceful protest is ...

Nicely done. :smt023 A fantastically detailed review. Five stars. :smt027 :smt038 :smt041 "napalmerski wrote: The bear slammed it's paws on the floor and growled like a rabid dog. Saliva drenched ...

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HA! Yeah, mercenaries allow a lot of flexibility. Those bloody fellows love their pay checks. :lol: Thanks, I never thought about that. For some reason I'm seeing an image of ...

Thanks. :D And sorry for the setting confusion. :lol: The entire thing is set outside. The stair case is one of those outdoor ones. And, yeah, I guess I should ...

I guess. :( And, you're one of the few people on here that I know.

I'm not good at writing characters. I don't know any people, so I wouldn't know how a person thinks. :(

Any sequel requests?

There it is! I have been hunting for this post of mine for a while. For some reason it did not appear on my user portfolio. :lol: *Wipes sweat off ...

Thanks guys for your awesome reviews! They're very much appreciated! :D I didn't realize that one paragraph was going to be so liked. :) I am a fan of description, ...

Thank you kindly Ranger Hawk. :D I'll be sure and get to making those corrections soon. *I went ahead and fixed a number of the issues you pointed out. Will ...