AspiringAuthorA..M.

Hello there friend. I'm just here for some friendly comments. You have a talent for description. You really do. But, I see that some people have bombarded you with saying ...

Har, Haur, Haur! :lol: "I practice and practice the clarinet all day long and I never get any better" -Squidward Tentacles Very wise words indeed, they have inspired many generations.

What the hell was this rabbit? My heart all but leapt out of my throat. I was scared for my life. So goddamned scared that I swear I was shaking ...

I feel kind of sorry for Celeste. He’s at the police station now, hands cuffed and stuck behind his back, being violently questioned. I’d heard the voice of a policeman ...

Wow, that story hits a bit close to home. I can sort of relate to Lexine. He likes helping people but no one cares about him. Sounds like me and ...

The words in red are corrections that I made. A moment later something glinted catching my eye it was at the surface. I moved over slowly and unsurely towards it ...

The writing seems a bit rushed at times. But, over all not too bad. Kind of makes me think of my school. The kind of girl in your story is ...

Oh, I love the Kingdom Heart series. It may very well be my favorite video game franchise. Who would have known that Square Enix and Disney making a game together ...

I was thinking the same thing about why females in fantasy stories are exaggeratedly gorgeous. But, to cover for that you can say something how laws have been passed in ...

Yes, the grammar could use some tinkering with. I think the first reviewer pretty much went over the wall with that so I'll be moving on. Again, like the previous ...