Ashnirai

Thank you so much for this review! I really appreciate the detail you went into. I'm glad you enjoyed it (despite the ending). You definitely have a point with the ...

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story despite the bittersweet ending. I kept things a little vague because I thought it suited the vibe of a ...

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Hey Dracula, thank you for the review! I'm glad you like Cecily and Raleigh (he's the narrator. I'm writing in third person limited), and I'm happy that his sarcastic side ...

Hey TheKid, thanks or the review

Thank you for the review!

Thank you! ouo Ahh, I understand the second stanza now. If that's the case though, I would maybe use 'sunlight' instead of 'sun'? As for the salmon, I get what ...

You're welcome, I'm always happy to be of help ouo.

You're welcome ouo. I'm always happy to be of help.

I'm glad you like the excerpt at the start. I'm really bad at writing anything even remotely similar to poetry but I wanted something at the beginning. So yeah, glad ...

Thanks for reviewing :) Yeah, it does seem really clunky and I know I have a habit of over describing unnecessary details - hopefully it'll get better in future redrafts.

:) Thank you! I was actually a bit worried that the reference to magic would go unnoticed; magic will be a big part in this story.

Thank you! I'm really glad you like the names too; gods knows how much time I've spent trying to find ones that will fit.

Thank you!