Ashlee

Wow. I really liked this alot (that may make me sound weird, but I guess I am). You are an excellent writer, and even though this is unrelated to your ...

Where it says, "All my friend love looking at them" it should say friends. I like having the candy. I always have a lot by the time I am all ...

Wow. I really liked this a lot. It makes me feel a bit nostalgic. When you mentioned the pictures, for some reason it made me think of time passing by. ...

The spelling and grammar is perfect. I like the way you ended it. Your choice of words is very good, in my opinion. I like the way they talk. ...I ...

I like this a lot. You are very good at writing, so when you write more please PM me and let me know so I can read it. I didn't ...

AW!!!! This story made me cry!! It's truly amazing, and I'm not just saying that! If only real guys were like that! :lol: I absolutely LOVE that story! I wanna ...

The cheerful candlelight danced across a variety of expressions I love the way you wrote that, it makes everything seem 100x more elegant than it already was. This story is ...

"Gramps says, 'One: are you German?' Prisoner can't do much but say yes. 'Two,' Gramps continues, and the prisoner sighs in relief, 'if I gave you this gun, would you ...

I like this but I don't really know what's going on... Is he in an insane asylum? I'm confused but I hope you write more so I can figure this ...

This story is so sweet it made me cry. You know how to make the reader feel . I understood what Mary was going through, because I have just had ...

Like I said before, you are a very good writer. I like the female character. Is she a dream catcher, too? Anyways, I was walking down a street in a ...

That is so sweet! It's absolutely beautiful. I'm actually crying. If love really can last a lifetime then that is truly amazing. You are a vary good writer. You make ...

Wow. This is a very good prologue. It builds up the suspense with a little information then, BAM! It leaves you hanging. I think you have a pretty good grasp ...

You are an amazing writer! This story is fantastic. It is laced with emotions and feelings. I like how you give the readers background on the main character, it gives ...

I like this poem a lot , because just about everyone can relate to music. I’m wedged between strangers and an equally indifferent bar; Moving, seeing, breathing are each impossible. ...