Ashes

I really liked this. Wasn't excpecting the friend to kill himself, so that was a twist. The ending was good, if a little vague. You could do with redrafting the ...

I really liked this! I agree with the other replies: you should add a bit more description of the characters but other than that it's brilliant. Can't wait to read ...

Hey! I really liked this but found it a bit confusing at the beggining. The story is a really difficult subject to write about but I really think you got ...