AshNaz

Hullo, my lovely. Yes, I have arrived. You may bow. Nah, I kid. Here I am to review this wonderful piece. So I have to say, I'm impressed. Usually it ...

Hola muchacho :) OK, so I liked how you established the chapter with Adden dreaming. Noting from the last chapter, this is a strange world he lives in, so I ...

So, straightaway I get what you meant in my review about the whole difficulty with simplicity thing. I've had that problem ever since I started writing, and it always threw ...