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Re: Crows Peck The Stones To Move
Hello there, crestfallen. I heard you were in need of some reviews, so here I am to oblige. First things first, darling: your formatting. Quite frankly, it is a sight ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Trying to Define Art
Interesting, but ultimately gimmicky. What purpose does the lack of sentence capitalization serve? What of the over-wrought metaphor? Nothing really, except to grab attention with how unusual it is. I
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Chapter of Fathomable Sadness
Hello, RinSuru. I, Art, shall be your reviewer this fine day of review. You have quite a mouthful of a title there; if I might suggest shortening it to something ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Warmed Over
I am afraid, my dear, that I shall have to be the dissident here and tell you that I did not find this piece all that good. Now, this is ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Escape.
It's raining and I'm wet and pissed and angsty and so fucking pumped. I don't normally approve of curse words, especially the F-word being used in the narration, but it ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: The New Youth Revolution (sponsored by Hot Topic)
Hello there, Jakesweden, and welcome to YWS. I, ArticulateOverlord, shall be your reviewer today. I must admit that your title is what caught my eye. A youth revolution and Hot ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: The Bloodless, Floundering Vampire of Me-ville
Hello there, my dear. I, ArticulateOverlord, shall be your reviewer today. I hope you take no offense at any issues I point out; I am merely trying to help. Beautiful, ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Jumping Blind #1 [Dogs of War Contest]
Hello there, Isaac. You have the dubious honor of being the recipient of my first review with this account. I do hope it finds you well. Before I start on ...
Sep 22, 2010
