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ArticulateOverlord

ArticulateOverlord

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Crows Peck The Stones To Move

    Hello there, crestfallen. I heard you were in need of some reviews, so here I am to oblige. First things first, darling: your formatting. Quite frankly, it is a sight ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Trying to Define Art

    Interesting, but ultimately gimmicky. What purpose does the lack of sentence capitalization serve? What of the over-wrought metaphor? Nothing really, except to grab attention with how unusual it is. I

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Chapter of Fathomable Sadness

    Hello, RinSuru. I, Art, shall be your reviewer this fine day of review. You have quite a mouthful of a title there; if I might suggest shortening it to something ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Warmed Over

    I am afraid, my dear, that I shall have to be the dissident here and tell you that I did not find this piece all that good. Now, this is ...

    Dec 18, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Escape.

    It's raining and I'm wet and pissed and angsty and so fucking pumped. I don't normally approve of curse words, especially the F-word being used in the narration, but it ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The New Youth Revolution (sponsored by Hot Topic)

    Hello there, Jakesweden, and welcome to YWS. I, ArticulateOverlord, shall be your reviewer today. I must admit that your title is what caught my eye. A youth revolution and Hot ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Bloodless, Floundering Vampire of Me-ville

    Hello there, my dear. I, ArticulateOverlord, shall be your reviewer today. I hope you take no offense at any issues I point out; I am merely trying to help. Beautiful, ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Jumping Blind #1 [Dogs of War Contest]

    Hello there, Isaac. You have the dubious honor of being the recipient of my first review with this account. I do hope it finds you well. Before I start on ...

    Sep 22, 2010


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