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Arri

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: It's Like Looking For Home

    .....I'm not sure of this....I'm a fan of rhyme so I don't like your poem. 2nd, you have nice thoughts, contrasts, comparisons and metaphors but without that you got nothing. ...

    Jan 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I wish i was part of someone too.

    Repetition is the only way you ever learn anything. You have to see it a million times from a million different views in order to really understand it, so don't ...

    Jan 16, 2009


/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./
— Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)