Arouet

Hey there! Not bad, definitely has potential for those who enjoy Star Wars Fan fic. First of all It would have been nice if you could've elaborated the story a ...

Hi there! Wonderful poem, very sweet words. First of all I wanna know if you said you have to believe in a God if such a wonderful thing exists as ...

Wow, very gripping story. this definitely deserves more attention. First I would like to give my critique on this then continue to point out it's genius: You mention in the ...

Very powerful. As much as it isn't a poem, it can be with just a little effort. If you put your time and energy into something you could possibly enjoy ...

Hi there! Wonderful read and very smooth writing. What I enjoyed most was the character progression, I know how difficult it is to portray a change in mental attitude of ...

Hi there! Speed read through this chapter and I would have to agree with @RacheDrache about it being a little too fast paced for a fantasy novel. But what I ...

Well, putting your emotions on paper is definitely better than keeping it bottled up, believe me. You are definitely a young adolescent considering the way you use your words (no ...

This is an honestly heartfelt story, how are you still in the green room!? Anyways, the story is just like any inspirational story because, well, there is no other way ...

Very interesting concept and brilliant writing I must say. If everyone is given a new name every week is it really possible for someone to get attached to a single ...