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I agree with Master_Yoda, Ender's Game was ....awesome! But the best book I have ever read,well so far in my two years of actually reading, i would say..... Gone by ...

No second thoughts now, her dream is now the truth. I did not understand that stanza,sentence,thing.(don't know about poems) That was the only thing that bothered me. It is a ...

WOW!! great! a lot of imagery. (my english teacher would totally give you an A+ for the semester, she would also cry because of the great awesome usage of imagery.) ...

Some trees lay ahead, safety? To me it doesn't make sense,try a diffrent puncutation. there were a couple more mistakes, but they were pointed out above. I really enjoyed it. ...

Didn’t I tell you to can it?” Silence. That was never good. Either it meant I was going to have to go soul collecting steamed, or Reaper wanted me to ...

Oh my Gosh! This is sooooo sad! The tears were choking me, I’ve never cried so much without realizing it. Noah took his eyes off the road to look at ...

"Why can't we let them find us? Who are they? Tax collectors? Women you forgot to pay for-” giggled here! I really liked it I could see the scenario very ...

Oh My Gosh!!!!!! Phycopathathic children stories!!! It has been sooooooo long since i have seen one of those!!!! (3 months,but feels like 3 years)! You have talent!!!! You have just ...

For your first time writing an adventure novel.......Amazing...... I love it!! You descibed the looks! I like the ending Talking to the head was never easy, and he just hoped ...

Ha love the last pararaph it made me laugh! “Well sorry my boobs don’t measure up.” That was also funny! It felt as though the characters were alive! I am ...

I suddenly thought You seem to use suddenly alot in here, but alot of people use words reapeatedly, even I do! I can see things a bit more clearly Change ...

I liked it. I am curious about what world he should stay away from, I will be reading on. :) You need a little of discription. Maybe you inteneded to ...

Wow! I loved it! I will be keep an eye out for more of this story for sure. these dreams that brought his life Change the to that, but it ...

I like the idea! “Hello, Death here!” He called Had me laughing! He said it so casually! It does seem like the demons are doing it for fun, but that ...

I haven't really read limitless, but by reading this chapter I am going to read it. I love your vocabulary so.....more advanced. :D I saw no grammar mistakes, well what ...