Areida

It's not my favorite poem in the entire world, but it was nice. Form following function was neat here. Music is hard to write about, because it's very difficult to ...

I don't have anything new to contribute, I don't think... I agree with Snoink about making them seem less isolated from their surroundings. Cathedrals are really amazing to look at, ...

I really like your style, Icaruss. Blunt, yet intelligent, and with an interesting flow. And fricking hilarious too. You had me hooked from the first paragraph! So, a few suggestions: ...

I liked this. I can relate, not because I'm in love with a musician, but because I have some really good friends who are amazing pianists and violinists. So I ...

Honestly, there were times when I used to worry that someday you'd just run out of brilliance, but you're still as full of awesomeness and delicious prose as ever. This ...

Ooh, I really liked this. Partly because I completely adore the word hubris, but also because it flows nicely and has good imagery as well. It's one of those poems ...

The poem overall seemed like something I'd read before - not a lot of really original material here. From the fire/ember/smouldering images, to their connection with pain and lies... it's ...

Lol, I must have been reading Shel Silverstein to my sister that day. Wow, it really does sound like Shel Silverstein! I really like it, though. No matter how you ...

Hey, Barrio! Double-space this sucker, then shoot me a PM and I'll leave you a comment. I'm morally opposed to forcing my eyes to read those fat chunks of paragraphs ...

Oh, hon, that last line just hit me right in the gut. I completely get what you're saying; my parents divorced when I was about the age you are right ...

Hi there! Just leaving a note for myself that I wanted to come back and take a closer look at this one, and leave you a comment. It would be ...

I haven't critiqued fiction in a while, but here goes. Diving right in: I hate it here. I hate it. Why did we even come? I had friends, I had ...

Hi Fand! Er... Sir Fand... ;) Anyway. I like the poem itself, but I'm iffy on the formatting. Of course, I read poetry because I like it, not because I ...

I like, gummy! Sometimes your poetry just flies right over my head, but after a couple of read-throughs, I got a lot more out of this than I had on ...

I second that, Dreamy. I thought there had to be some kind of mistake on the cover of my book or something. I actually had to go look it up ...