Archerstone64

I liked the story it was awesome, I really how explicit you were with the settings. Ya know i had to wright reviews for a class assignment but I am ...

I really liked how you showed not told with the setting and really gave me the idea of living in mid evil china. Also just like jacksonm2002 i liked how ...

I liked the descriptiveness you used in most of the story like describing the temple and mountain. Though I wonder if you could have added more detail about her life ...