Araidne

Actually, this is about a fictious aunt. My aunt is a extremly good cook.(with 9 kids, she kinda has to be)!

I just re-read it and i still love it!

It fits the picture to perfection!Bravo! :whistle:

Well, at least you followed the 5-7-5 rule.good job :)

I say work on it a bit, and you shall have a terrific piece of poetry! =D>

Your welcome. i enjoy reading your work. Loved this poem! :D

I agree with Angel17. Keep working on it, and you will have a great poem. :D

Thank you! I will drag one of my parents to the nearest bookstore! :D

Really? I have always wanted to learn Gaelic. How/where is she leaning it?

Oh , and if you are reading this, the poem is in a Celtic style. :P

Thanks! I will edit. I do appreciate tips on how to improve my writing! :D

Harry Potter all the way. I can't believe what she did with Dumbledore!

PLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE hurry and write more!!!!!! I am begging you!!!!! PLEASE!! =D>

Wow. that is good!!!! The Hiv prevention people should use your poem in an advertisement. It is that good. Keep on writing!

Oopps. I will edit. I was in a hurry. :oops: