AquaMarine

Wow! (yes, i had to review it!) I really like this, it has a really peaceful rhythm and flow, it just reads well i guess. I agree with the ellipsis ...

i didn't really get this poem, but i have to agree with the above. Please, just please, delete the repetition. Don't get me wrong, i love repetition when it's used ...

i guess i'm pretty much agreeing with everyone else, i love the idea of the piece, i really liked these lines There's a vice sitting on my chest like an ...

Totally brilliant! thanks it made my morning. I disagree with some of the comments, the way you used parts from the actual book just made it better for me! But ...

There wasn't really anything in here that stood out to me and made it a really good poem, it seemed a bit cobbled together and not thought through completely. Now ...

I was totally like other people, i thought this was going to be a deep, depressing poem about suicide or something! but no! It was . . . original. Did ...

You are quite intriguing, a mystery And when I think I want to see That secret which you posses I shy away, afraid of what will surface If I should ...

I really loved this poem, and i totally agree with what everyone else has said. The idea of the presenting spring as a little girl is in itself a good ...

i liked the idea of the poem - if i've got it right. but i did think that it got lost in throughout. i agree with cross in that the ...

i really, really liked this poem. splattered together, mixed together. i though that line was really well done with the repetition. i love the way it flows throughout, it's one ...

i thought that this was really well written and a good idea. Most of it was really original ideas with nice words and imagery. However, i thought that the part ...