Apple

Alright so Apple here I am for the full review of this baby. So first I'll open up with what I do review; your MC firstly is analysed because without ...

Wow! That's the one word that sums this up for me. I'm going to give you one large review on your latest chapter that will sum up what I think. ...

Ooh very nice. Great description, showing and not telling (which is a first and I must say *great*...this is a pretty darn great first novel! I guess I don't really ...

Alright I'm just going to mention that I do not deal with grammar/spelling in any way because by fixing it for you, you won't learn how to deal with it ...

Hello. I'll be your reviewer for today. Firstly, I do not do grammar, I just pick up a point that I don't feel fits and try and show you how ...

So, you probably don't know me because I've been off of YWS for a while now and I still am but -- I don't think you want to hear my ...

Wow, this was great though I don't think your title flatters your writing genious. History sounds bland and plain, and your story frankly isn't. I haven't really got any suggestions ...

Weee first review. Alright, let's get started! The room was dark with the slight glow of strange liquids, a strange buzzing sound echoed threw should be through. You're meaning threw ...

Oh Roal I'm terribly sorry about the late review but I'll give it all I got anyway. This was great! I mean I loved the expression and detail you placed ...

I hope this is what you wanted. You didn't leave a link on the page so I'm guessing this is what you wanted reviewed. I hope so! I. Nitpicks: You're ...

Damn, Born is beating me to posting. She can't be the number one fan because I am! There is only room in town for one number one fan and that ...

Sorry for lateness, I've been hospital for some while and I've been working to, time is just not my friend. Here is your review nonetheless. Hideous nights weather whether the ...

Alright, so I felt bad for not getting to this earlier but everything has been so hectic with my Grandfather being in and out of hospital, as well as my ...

So I will mention this first off. I only do nitpicks if you request a review from my WRFF thread, period. But it doesn't mean I'm going to do a ...

Why do you have to do that? This is the best, I mean c'mon: why keep us hanging? This is not fair! I wanna see what happens to Ren and ...