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Good work truly, I haven't read your other one so I guess I am going to right now...though....you wrote so well I thought I had read the first one trully ...

Truly a good peice of work, you did awesomely in writing this! Keep writing more because I can't wait to read the rest. Good job this is truly good! I ...

This is really good, I have always liked fantasy and have been picky with what people write but this is perfect. Great job keep going, I can't find any mistakes ...

Good job! This is really good I am going to go read the rest so I understand it properly but otherwise this is really well done. It is thorough and ...

Wow! That's all I can say. You did really good job at writing this congrats. I mean it was awesome sentence structure stong, I couldn't find any grammar or spelling ...

Good job, this is really good. I really enjoyed it, you are a really good writer. Your characters were written well and I couldn't find any grammatical error (I suck ...

I don't really read scripts and am not one for plays but this was really yell wrote. I don't see any failure, it could've beena bit longer other wise no ...

This was really good, I havenit read the others so I didn't understand it well but still really good job on writing. YOur sentence structure was strong and you explained ...

What is the shadowed figure?! Anyway really good you have to read over it and go over your mistakes and lengthen some of the words and make them sound a ...