AntoniaClarke

Hi, you made a lot of points in this review, thank you for being so detailed. The grammar and punctuation obviously needs correcting in places. Content wise, this is really ...

Hi. Thank you for a very detailed review. We understand the ideas you have about adding something into the death scene and we will consider adding some in. As for ...

Thank you for a very positive review. This was originally intended to be just a short story, but in light of your comments we have decided to extend it to ...

Thank you for the review. Glad you're so keen to read on. It's very encouraging. I will take your suggestions on board.

Thank you for such a thorough review. I will let you know when the second part is up. Thanks again.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. And I will make sure to change the error.

Thank you. That was very complimentary.

Thank you, I will take all of your comments on board. In some ways I'm glad it annoyed you, because now I know where to make improvements. Thank you.

Layla is the former of the two options. And yes I may consider a follow up as you have requested. Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed it.

I'm glad you share my love of the psychopath. Your review was very fluttering. Thank you. I will definitely check out your short story.

Thank you for the review and your compliments. The ending wasn't written in a hurry - but then, it isn't a complete ending. This was just an excerpt of an ...

Thank you.