Anshita

I watch As you walk away; Away from the crowd, From the groups of friends Absorbed in each other, Not sparing you A glance. I know you're lonely; I know ...

I told you that it couldn’t be. You weren’t meant for me. I said you were my best friend. But you couldn’t (can't) be more than that. I think it ...

i like your poem. Nice use of word, may be you could use some more words which could explain you feeling better. It had a nice rhythm and a nice ...

I like the lyrics very much. You had good choice of words. I’m saying You are my whole heart And nothing can shake it My wounds heal My heart is ...

Its a really good poem. I like it very much. Good use of words. As fragile said rhyming was a bit off at places. But, it had a really good ...

OMG Dhriti... I love this poem...every time I read it, it just touches my heat n i feel like crying... I am sorry i left you there and came here...i ...

It is a really nice song. I like it very much. I has a nice rhythm to it and everyone who reads it can actually make a beat for it, ...

is a really nice song. it has a very nice rhythm to it and whoever reads it can make up a different beat for the song, which is good. i ...

The song is really good and yeah as Carly said try to mix up the rhyme scheme a little bit (i think it can make the song better). I am ...